As funny as it may sound my OC is my own personal ponification of the Witcher; maybe you know it by any chance. Anyway this is why he has a white mane. The black fur represents a corruption that made him be the way he is now; I am aware of the unoriginality if it comes to colors but so far it was playing around quite nice.
Da reden wir schön auf englisch und es stellt sich heraus das ich mit einem deutschen rede xd
Yep but even if we are both from germany, its more social to speak english so others udnerstand what we are talking about. Yep I have heard of the witcher,s o this is pretty understandable. But unoriginality is really a wide term. This is the OC of my own story: [link] Hes a reaper, a pony cursed with immortality to act as a bringer of death. He is under Celestia's service and guards the main character as a great age of demons comes.
If you are curious, I would very much appreciate it if you gave my story a try. [link] I worked very hard on it, took me an entire year to write and i go a lot of positive feedback for it. Fimfiction even declared me as gold author.
Wow I myself am quite surprised. This is pretty well written. The choice of words is sometimes a little bit clumsy and you once wrote 'verry' instead of 'very. But other than that, its pretty deep and well explained. I like the suspense and the perspective.